October Girl

WHOA!!! BIG No HUGE improvement. I like Peter's character it made everything feel a little bit tense but it was a good tense like a.... Read-More kind of tense. Peter's ...

Hey there Dommy, Domono, Dom! ^__^ sorry couldn't help myself lol. Anywho I really like how Isabelle acted in this chapter, but maybe you should put more of a cliff ...

Hey there SakuraFallsSweetly♥ I'll be another one of your reviewers. First off by saying your story was OK but it wasn't GREAT! But here's why. We have no idea what ...

Ello ^_^ I'm Max and I just wanted to say nice poem. I felt like the 8th stanza was a bit lacking, but then again that's just me. I think ...

Wow Darling, I couldn't have written it better myself. It's very good and so discriptive-I could imagine everything. Like the first one to critique this I'm not sure if it's ...

Wow, girl. Simply wow I love it! :D I wasn't actually expecting Carl to be the visitor. But it still works. I'm sorry I didn't read it ASAP I have ...

Dang girl! This is so exciting. I told you I'd be here every step of the way. Now, I'd just like to point out a couple of things since I've ...

HOOOLLLLYYY..... COW..... :D Darling, you have a great and intence beginning! And I love it, but with the whole 'vampire' thing, you might want to be careful because that is ...

Hello there! I read the first paragraph and honestly was completely hooked! I love how you descibe the character as a tooth pick, I know the feeling. I think it ...

Hello there, lilymoore! I will be your reviewer today and would like to say I think personally, it would be something I read. I really liked it especially this, [quote="lilymoore"][i]I’ll ...

How to become UNengaged. Haha, I love the title and the beginning, it starts out slow then it's like BAM! Which is kind of eh, but it works. Anywho, I ...

Hello there, I'm the first to comment on this, my name is, Max. :D This poem doesn't remind of of a cafe, in a cafe it's calm and quiet. This ...

hey Ross! Max here, I have never read anything much like it. I've never read a gay romance, but this is my first time and I wanted to say, I ...

I would say Stray- by: Rachel Vincent (book 1) Rouge- By: Rachel Vincent (book 2) Pride- By: Rachel Vincent (book 3) Susan Elizabeth Phillips! ((she's a great author)) The Darkest ...

Ello, Sparklefairy! I'm Max and I just wanted to say welcome to YWS, it's great to have another member on here. First off, this is amazing for your first post. ...